On Thursdays lesson, we had to display our trailer project to the class of what we had done so far.
As our piece was hardly put together as our filming schedule 2 was wrong and we hadn't yet filmed schedule 3 and we hadn't put the music on and the titles were not completed in an effective manner; this worried us hugely.
When we showed our trailer, all we had out on the screen was the second part of the trailer and a few titles of where it would be placed, this left the trailer feeling very empty and confusing as the concept and the story were hardly put together. We had to explain what was missing, such as the music and the first sequence of the trailer, for them to realise that it was hardly completed.
Although, our feedback were not as harsh or bad as we expected. They gave us hope that there could be potential with this and they appreciated and liked the majority of the shots, especially the one where Gothel sees the tower.
Below are the feedback sheets.
Majority of the feedback stated that majority of them "liked the variety of shots... framing... lighting... good use of mise en scene and location and costume" in terms of the shots and framing which was encouraging news, however they said that one ideal improvement that needs to be made was the "steadiness of the shots" which was good criticism because we needed to know and understand where.
The second half was about the editing and framing, where the majority stated "had a rough idea of the story line... the changes of shots... good titles and transitions and framing was well done." Although, they did say it did need to be "cut down... smoothness" which we agree with as we were a bit lost on how it would look put together.
The last part was how they though the sound was, two said that the "running was good" and the others mentioned that "there was no sound but when it will be on it will be good" all in all this was really constructive and easy for us to work with.
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